touch beautiful places


It rained pretty seriously last night, and I woke up before six and set up in the convenient shelter Palisade’s town park offers its users and read some more of this really curious and interesting book, Ojibwe Singers: Hymns, Grief, and a Native American Culture in Motion, by Michael D. McNally. I found it in the giftshop at Itasca State Park visitor center, next to all the tourist stuff – go figure! Anyway, the book is about what the Ojibwe people have made of the Protestant hymns taught them by Christian missionaries. The book’s claim is that a specifically Ojibwe method of singing these hymns — in unison, very slowly and solemnly, usually at wakes or funerals — came into being, and is quite separate from the ordinary hymn-singing that happened under the supervision of the missionaries on Sunday mornings in church.

Hymns were among the first texts that got translated from English into Ojibwe, starting sometime in the late 1820s, but because various concepts central to Christian theology (e.g. sin, salvation, grace) just simply aren’t directly translatable into Ojibwe, one can imagine that the Ojibwe texts are not terribly literal embodiments of Wesley and Watts.

Here, for example, is my favorite re-translation of the Ojibwe in the book. First, the original stanza, from Come, Holy Spirit, Heavenly Dove (Isaac Watts), #510 in the 1982 Episcopal Hymnal, for those of you following along at home:

And shall we, Lord, for ever be
In this poor dying state?
Our love so faint, so cold to thee,
And thine to us so great?

And here is Larry Cloud Morgan’s re-translation of the 1910 Ojibwe version of the hymn.

As we are thinking,
As we sing,
Our prayers
Touch beautiful places in us.

The Ojibwe version may not have a whole lot to do with Isaac Watts, but it’s definitely taking me someplace I want to go!

6 thoughts on “touch beautiful places”

  1. Now this really piques my interest! (Of course! It has to do with language and music!)

    There are few better or more fascinating ways of getting to know other cultures than by observing how they communicate with the Infinite, the Almighty. And especially, learning what they don’t have words for; sometimes that can be a great barometer of what we might not need.

  2. monica, you are just AMAZING! we looked up his email yesterday, ’cause we’re thinking of trying to meet up with him when we get closer to Northfield… and the new book looks really good….thanks!!

  3. Hey Eve,

    I’m following you down the river too, getting vicarious experiential and intellectual thrills by the kayak-full. I love the image of you pondering twice-removed retranslations of Episcopal hymns at the crack of dawn in a tiny midwestern town’s park.

    You’re an inspiration.


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