Here are a few excerpts from A. J. Liebling’s marvelous profile, The Earl of Louisiana, which I highly recommend reading if you have any interest in Louisiana, politics, racism, or fabulous writing… WOW!

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When the new Charity Hospital was built here, some Negro politicians came to Huey and said it was a shame there were no Negro nurses, when more than half the patients were colored. Huey said he’d fix it for them, but they wouldn’t like his method. He went around to visit the hospital and pretended to be surprised when he found white nurses waiting on colored men. He blew high as a buzzard can fly, saying it wasn’t fit for white women to be so humiliated. It was the most racist talk you ever heard, but the result was he got the white nurses out and the colored nurses in, and they’ve had the jobs ever since. (reporter Tom Sancton, quoted in A.J. Liebling, The Earl of Louisiana, 1960)

“After all this over, he’ll [Rainach, Long's primary opponent] probably go up there to Summerfield, get up on his front porch, take off his shoes, wash his feet, look at the moon, and get close to God.” Then the old man, changing pace, shouted in Rainach’s direction, “And when you do, you got to recognize that niggers is human beings!” (A.J. Liebling, The Earl of Louisiana, 1960)

The Deep South has gone on for a hundred visible years since the Civil War bemoaning the twenty-five years of its own total history that preceded. In this submerged fifth of its past, according to the legend, great “floating palaces” went up the majestic rivers (since sullied forever by Yankees washing their feet in them) to thriving cities (like the Alick of 1854). Short-order aristocrats, rich from cotton made on new land by prime Negroes, built the great houses, and elegance busted out all over.

From the beginning of the rush for cotton lands, in the 1830s, to the beginning of the War, in 1861, was a span shorter than separates us from the administrations of Herbert Hoover and Jimmy Walker. This included the Caliban beginnings, the making of the money, the achievement of elegance, and the historic split-second left for the elegance to harden–like a quick cake icing. This knockabout-comedy turn in history has furnished forth the brooding squashy ancestral memories of a hundred Faulknerian heroes, echt and ersatz.

It is as if, in 2029, the whole nation should blame all intervening misfortunes on the stock-market crash of 1929, and think of the few years of money-making — for atypical people — that preceded 1929 as a thousand-year Reich of Stutz Bearcats for Everybody. I opened my mind to my friend when we got on the road again, and he, since he was from New Orleans, took no offense. In New Orleans a planter was always a figure of fun, a pigeon to pluck.

“The South doesn’t believe the story,” he said, “except when it seems useful to pretend to believe it. That’s why I can’t read Faulkner. And one of the bonds between Earl Long and his audiences is that he doesn’t believe it, and they don’t believe it, and it’s a kind of private joke between them, like two kids in Sunday School that don’t believe in God.” (A.J. Liebling, The Earl of Louisiana, 1960)

In its passion for politics, the Gret Stet of Loosiana, as southern Louisianians refer to it, resembles most closely the Arab republic of Lebanon, but in its economy it is closer akin to the Arab sheikdoms of the Persian Gulf. The Gret Stet floats on oil, like a drunkard’s teeth on whiskey.  (A.J. Liebling, The Earl of Louisiana, 1960)

The Mediterraneans who settled the shores of the interrupted sea scurried across the gap between the Azores and Puerto Rico like a woman crossing a drafty hall in a sheer nightgown to get to a warm bed with a man in it. (A.J. Liebling, The Earl of Louisiana, 1960)

“Fellas like Faubus and Rainach and Leander Perez and da rest of da White Citizens and Southern Gentlemen in dis state want to go back behind Lincoln,” he said. “And between us, gentlemen, as we sit here among ourselves,” he said, arresting a chunk of fried steak in mid-air and leaning forward to give his statement more impetus, “we got to admit dat Lincoln was a fine man and dat he was right.”

Then, as he turned back to the steak, skewering it against a piece of ham before swallowing both, he caught my look of astonishment and cried, too late, “But don’t quote me on dat!” (p.138)

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  1. Susan Sommer says:

    This is wonderful!

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After the Easter trip to Mississippi, I ended up first in Sarasota, FL, at the Hermitage, then home to NYC for a minute, then back to Montalvo to retrieve my car and kayak and bike, and then I drove to northeastern Wyoming, where I am spending May at an artist’s colony at Ucross. I was here once a long time ago, and since then, they have built the most perfect composer’s studio ever. I really really love it here. Wow.

On Saturday I took a hike up to some teepee circles that are on a hill overlooking the tiny intersection that forms the town of Ucross (population 25.) It turns out that the name teepee circle is misleading: archaeologists do not find evidence of encampments or any domestic life at these sites, and seem to think the circles have something to do with religion or vision quests. And they are very old, at least 1000 – 2000 years old, maybe more.

What I found deeply striking, and the reason I am writing about it on this RiverBlog, was that the location of this teepee circle, on a plateau/promontory beneath the crest of an even higher hill, overlooking the river valley from a good height — removed, but not so high above as to be inaccessible or feel terribly remote — is that it seems like the natural analogue of the man-made mounds I encountered from Cahokia near St. Louis all the way down to Natchez. It almost feels like the Native Americans along the Mississippi river decided they needed to build artificial versions of this mountainous landscape along the river where no landscapes like this would ever naturally be found.

And because the migration of Native Americans I’ve been mostly thinking about is the 19th century exile from the East to the West, it’s really strange to imagine that perhaps Native Americans who had lived here in Wyoming and Montana moved east to the Mississippi river valley and decided to replicate an important Western geological/spiritual structure by hand. (I’m totally making this up of course, I have no actual knowledge of the migration patterns of Native Americans a thousand or more years ago.)

These teepee circles and mounds are ghost towns in some special sense — not abandoned villages, but evidence of a lost or abandoned spiritual life — more like Stonehenge than Derwent. I’m thinking that in the Middle East and Greece and Italy, (to name my own preoccupations,) certain places have always had mystical or spiritual significance, and those places often get re-purposed, re-visioned, as different religions and religious rituals develop. Are there churches in the UK that were purposely built on prehistoric religious/ritual sites? I’m not thinking of an example of that kind of re-purposing in the US: the National Cathedral is not on a Native American religious site as far as I know, and I think there’s not enough respect for the Native American spiritual tradition to even think in terms of wanting to borrow or re-imagine the spiritual power Native Americans found in a particular place.

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  1. Susan Sommer says:

    Fascinating thought. In wonder if there’s any inadvertent borrowing — of a place that simply feels sacred, and so borrowed from past.

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“The mystery in how little we know of other people is no greater than the mystery of how much,” wrote Eudora in The Optimist’s Daughter. Perhaps the implication is that the same mystery applies to places as well as people.

My visits to Rodney with Chris and Mary in the last six months are as far distant from Eudora’s visits to Rodney in the 30s and 40s as hers are from the Civil War.

I’ve just gone through and added some excerpts from the Welty story At the Landing to a small set of selected images.

To explore more photos of Rodney and the surrounding river country, please go here.

a cannonball embedded in Rodney Presbyterian ChurchJerry on his way IIRodney cemeteryRodney cemeterythe main road, Rodneyflood-marked house, Rodneyfront door, Rodney

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  1. barbara field says:

    WonderWoman Eve: I’ve been dreaming of wisteria vines, and listening to your voice. I love the mix of older voices, lessons in botany and zoology, the sense of continuing movement and discovery. It is “brim” full of all of these. Being a classicist, I want to know about the connective tissue, if any.
    love, Barbara

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Somehow I thought of this poem in connection with the Archives of Exile project and Richard’s comment on my post yesterday. I don’t really know the poetry of Pessoa, and a quick bit of research turns up the fact that he wrote under a series of names — heteronyms, he called them — each of which had his own way of seeing the word and writing poetry. This is how Pessoa describes Caeiro, the writer of the poem below:

He sees things with the eyes only, not with the mind. He does not let any thoughts arise when he looks at a flower… the only thing a stone tells him is that it has nothing at all to tell him… this way of looking at a stone may be described as the totally unpoetic way of looking at it. The stupendous fact about Caeiro is that out of this sentiment, or rather, absence of sentiment, he makes poetry. (quoted in Wikipedia)

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Rather the flight of the bird passing and leaving no trace
Than creatures passing, leaving tracks on the ground.
The bird goes by and forgets, which is as it should be.
The creature, no longer there, and so, perfectly useless,
Shows it was there — also perfectly useless.

Remembering betrays Nature,
Because yesterday’s Nature is not nature.
What’s past is nothing and remembering is not seeing.
Fly, bird, fly away; teach me to disappear.

Alberto Caeiro (Fernando Pessoa) Portugal
in Poems of Fernando Pessoa

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I guess the point we are circling around is the way in which yesterday’s nature can’t be nature, or shall we say “natural”, but is culture. The wisteria in Rodney is historical, not natural, even though it is quite obviously a flowering vine blooming out of the ground in the spring. Does recognizing the wisteria as a human trace prevent me from fully seeing it, as I think I’m understanding Caeiro’s poem to say? Do Welty’s passionate things really endure in ways we can feel even when we are ignorant of the details? Or does everything simultaneously disappear and endure in some almost mystical way that is what we are feeling when we visit a ghost town or walk through ruins? And how much of this is sentimentality or nostalgia, and what of it is the essential, authentic, and totally real bond that ties humans together across life and death and time and distance?

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  1. Eve says:

    I guess what I’m saying is just that a rose is NOT a rose, and never will be as long as we are human, whether we like it or not.

  2. Eric Grunin says:

    I don’t assume Pessoa’s ‘Caeiro’ is a reliable narrator.

    Caeiro is slightly damaged in some way, and in this poem tries to compensate by searching for a Zen-like state of being ‘in the moment’; but he is apparently hindered by nostalgia. He calls this nostalgia ‘remembering’, but denying the (natural) process of memory is a symptom of his damage.

    Incidentally: the Salvadorean poet Roque Dalton also developed a roster of ‘heteronyms’, essentially characters who expressed themselves through poetry.

  3. Mary Rowell says:

    If past, present and future are all NOW it all works it seems to me. There is nothing old or new – it is just now.

    He who binds himself to a joy
    Does the winged life destroy.
    But he who kisses the joy as it flies
    Lives in eternity’s sunrise.
    William Blake

  4. I know very very well Pessoa and all his eteronimi, and he works on paradox like most of writers from Portugal, he is not Zen….

    VVittoria

  5. Eve says:

    thanks for all your comments, here and on Facebook, and Richard’s on the AoE blog as well… I’m really struck by Eric’s comment about the distinction between nostalgia and remembering, something that Richard and I have also been talking about on and off for a while now.

    Here’s a link to a post of mine on that subject on the Archive of Exile blog: http://archiveexilevoices.blogspot.com/2009/03/it-isnt-necessary-to-imagine-world.html

  6. Eve says:

    and here’s a larger selection (the posts tagged with “past and future”)…

    http://archiveexilevoices.blogspot.com/search/label/past%20and%20future

    I’m excited, because I think our tagging on the AoE blog is working the way I want tagging to work: yay!!! to re-read the Robert Coles compilation is particularly blowing my mind, wow..

  7. Nick Lichter says:

    While I was canoeing, and even now, perhaps especially now because these cultural personalities have continued to grow, to tendril me – whether decaying or subsuming or integrating is hard to say – and certainly Faulknerian in their tendrilations, I was struck by a very strong sense that lives of people gather and disperse like rain into rivers, and then the sea. We raindrops, we river, we sea of mingled salty lives again and again cloud awhile, drift into mountaintops awhile, overlook dry places, form and reform newly into selves. So, for me we are always out there, always potentially ready for some colorful period of tendril and passionate lovely purple blooming, ready to stay upon those wistful things, like hands holding cuttings in a lap.

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On this spring visit to Rodney, the blooming wisteria was a constant presence, the vines tangling in profusion everywhere.

It turns out that wisteria is actually an invasive species in the United States. Originally from China, it is a trace of the domesticating urges of the French settlers in the 18th and 19th centuries.

I picture a slim, elegant, brave woman (she is French, after all!) making the long trip across the ocean to New Orleans and up the river to Rodney, holding her wisteria cuttings tidily on her lap, stroking them now and again. I picture her planting them by the side of her newly-erected house in a lumpy clearing — not backhoe-raw as the clearings new houses stand in nowadays — but still, a scarred open place carved out of the deep woods of Mississippi.

She can not quite imagine that her delicate and beautiful wisteria will survive in this remote place.

She can not imagine that her lovely wisteria will thrive to grow into wild vines that pull down walls and strangle large trees.

She can not imagine that one day the wisteria will be the last remaining trace of human settlement in the town of Rodney.

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  1. Susan Sommer says:

    Beautiful!

  2. David Greer says:

    Oh, I’ve been wanting to just jump into this conversation. So much to tell you. First, I’m still on the boat – sitting in Tiger Fleet at present, and at leisure for a few hours – so whatever I write now will seem, to me at least, hurried and probably ill-considered, but I’ve been excited by the pics and narrative, and the comments. The wisteria pics are lovely. You were a bit early, I guess, for Dogwood, Redbud, and purple vetch and buttercups in the swales and low-lying wetland areas, or we would be musing about those, too, probably. It’s spring in the Valley! I just hate it that you’ve not been on the river this trip, watching the progressive greening of the river banks. It’s my favorite time of year. It sort of creeps up the river, the willows turning green, the vetch, so forth.
    Now, as to Rodney. Last time I was there it seemed in danger of being overtaken by the kudzu – talk about an invasive species! Years ago, there was a narrow dirt road down the side of the bluffs from what was the Port Gibson road – where you could get on and off the ferry – to Rodney. The 1973 flood took the bridge out. I doubt much is left of the road. It wouldn’t have taken much for it to lose itself in vegatation. I do remember stopping once to watch the fog lift over the river at a clearing on that road. (Jeannie was, maybe, 5 years old, in case she’s reading this. We were going, or had been, camping on the Natchez Trace at Rocky Springs.) We got out of the car, and, I swear, there was the decidedly creepy feeling of being stalked by a plant, the kudzu, reaching out from both sides of the road. It just wasn’t quick enough to get us. When I think about the kudzu it makes me feel a certain humility regarding the interventions of memory and culture. Not that I would discount such things. In the broad, alluvial valley of the Lower Mississippi, all of our constructions, all of the interventions of culture make apparent, permanent changes, at least in the sense that we could not undo them even if we wanted, nor could we call back into being what was there before. But everything is undone, eventually, hereabouts. The uncanniness you feel in Rodney is, in part, because when you’re there you’re a ghost, too, just not dead quite yet. What is undone does not “return” to any previous state. We might think of culture as somehow unnatural, but the kudzu has no such opinion. That’s why that sense of “southerness”, the oppressive sense of history – Faulkner still being the purest expression of that -
    seems so textured, so heavy you can’t seem to breath in it. Every moment seems stacked and crowded, eyes and knees, with every other moment. This is not the American way of counting time. (Hence, the Faulkners, Weltys, and so forth. We lost the War! as, I think, Flannery O’conner said when asked the why question.)
    Was very interested in Richard’s comments. Bring him with you next time you come this way. I’ll make a gumbo.

  3. Eve says:

    David, thank you so much for this, I especially loved “when you’re there you’re a ghost, too, just not dead quite yet,” and the crowded moments… (I just had a conversation yesterday with Despina about how Americans and Greeks have different conceptions of time — “much” time vs. “long” time, for example…)

    When you drive to Rodney these days, you have to go south past Alcorn College and then up again and west, the other Rodney Roads are closed or non-existent. (On google maps, all three roads are called Rodney Road, which makes me laugh.) Chris and I have agreed it would be good to go back when it’s low water and try to hike out to the river on a road that’s marked on the map but impassible when the water’s high. And then there’s Bruinsburg and the remains of the town of Grand Gulf. I guess the kudzu and the wisteria has definitely got me in its tendrils… if you’re not on the river, you should come, too…and maybe we can get Richard Steadman-Jones to join us, what a crew!~

  4. David Greer says:

    I don’t know about that hiking stuff. Bet you guys have never heard of “seed” ticks. But we can probably get a boat and explore Rodney Cutoff lake. The outlet, or what’s left of it, would probably allow you to go out into the river from the lake while the river is up; don’t know about during lower stages. I used to fish there 40 years ago (40 years ago!). I’ll check with my retired friend, Capt. Danny Green. He might be willing to drive down from Lake Providence with his new boat – big enough, he says, for a bunch of fatass old captains.
    There’s so much to see around there. Not far from Rodney is the old antebellum home once owned briefly by the actor George Hamiliton. That really had the hearts of the southern belles aflutter (even those with neatly trimmed goatees), until he sold it to the Hare krishnas. Hahaha! I’m serious. His name was Mud thereafter.
    I’m getting off tomorrow somewhere…in the middle of nowhere, Deer Park, another cutoff lake, probably. (The last incarnation of the str. Robert E. Lee can be found buried somewhere in the mud of that lake.) If I don’t get eaten by crocodillians I’ll be in touch from home.

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Eudora Welty documented Rodney in her 1930s photographs for the WPA, in several of her early stories, and in her 1944 photo-essay, Some Notes on River Country. Here are a few excerpts from her writing that apply directly to Rodney, and also to the Archives of Exile project I’m working on with Richard Steadman-Jones.

from Some Notes on River Country:

A place that ever was lived in is like a fire that never goes out. It flares up, it smolders for a time, it is fanned or smothered by circumstance, but its being is intact, forever fluttering within it, the result of some original ignition. Sometimes it gives out glory, sometimes its little light must be sought out to be seen, small and tender as a candle flame, but as certain.

I have never seen, in this small section of old Mississippi River country and its little chain of lost towns between Vicksburg and Natchez, anything so mundane as ghosts, but I have felt many times there a sense of place as powerful as if it were visible and walking and could touch me.

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Perhaps it is the sense of place that gives us the belief that passionate things, in some essence, endure. Whatever is significant and whatever is tragic in its story live as long as the place does, though they are unseen, and the new life will be built upon these things — regardless of commerce and the way of rivers and roads, and other vagrancies.

from the story At the Landing:

Whenever she thought that Floyd was in the world, that his life lived and had this night and day, it was like discovery once more and again fresh to her, and if it was night and she lay stretched on her bed looking out at the dark, a great radiant energy spread intent upon her whole body and fastened her heart beneath its breath, and she would wonder almost aloud, “Ought I to sleep?” For it was love that might always be coming, and she must watch for it this time and clasp it back while it clasped, and while it held her never let it go.

Then the radiance touched at her heart and her brain, moving within her. Maybe some day she could become bright and shining all at once, as though at the very touch of another with herself. But now she was like a house with all its rooms dark from the beginning, and someone would have to go slowly from room to room, slowly and darkly, leaving each one lighted behind, before going to the next. It was not caution or distrust that was in herself, it was only a sense of journey, of something that might happen. She herself did not know what might lie ahead, she had never seen herself. She looked outward with the sense of rightful space and time within her, which must be traversed before she could be known at all. And what she would reveal in the end was not herself, but the way of the traveler.

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Mary Rowell and I have been talking about putting together a band for a while now, and we spent a few days together at Montalvo in late March developing more rep for that project. Along with new work that’s still in progress, we made new versions of It Happens Like This, which you can listen to here, and Landscaping for Privacy, which I will post soon as well.

On Good Friday, when H. C. Porter and I were wandering around the almost-ghost-town of Rodney, we came upon a man named Jerry, who was fishing in the swamp on the edge of town. The water in Rodney is even higher than it was around Thanksgiving, when Mary and I visited there the first time. The river has moved about three miles west of where it was during the Civil War, orphaning the town in the woods. You can’t actually get to the river without a boat, because the intervening land is flooded most of the year.

Jerry is one of very few residents of Rodney — there are perhaps three families actually living here — and he lives off the land. While we watched, he was catching brim at the rate of about one a minute: hooking a worm, throwing in his line, pausing a moment, pulling the next fish in, taking it off the hook, and beginning the cycle again. Some guys we met later in the day told us that they had asked Jerry how many fish he caught and the answer was “Brim.” Jerry is a man of very few words, and it is possible he was answering a different question — what kind? rather than how many? — but of course the bucket was indeed full. Jerry was on his way to Lorman, walking the ten miles of back roads as he does several times a week to sell his fish at the market in town.

Mary and I have agreed that the name of our new band is Brim.


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  1. Eve, this is all so exciting and amazing and inspiring!

  2. Jane Dorn says:

    Excellent!

  3. Susan Sommer says:

    Wonderful!

  4. Eve says:

    thanks so much, Michael, Jane, Susan… great to hear from you!

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L’acqua che tochi de fiumi, è l’ultima di quella che andò, e la prima di quelle che viene; così il tempo presente. La vita bene spesa lunga è.

Leonardo da Vinci, Note 1174

here’s my translation [eager for improvements from my Italian-speaking friends]

The water you touch in a river
is the last that has passed
and the first that is coming;
so with the present moment.

The well-spent life is long.

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  1. Susan Sommer says:

    Oh. This is nice!

  2. vittoria says:

    Just to train your Italian:

    Ottima la traduzione. Leonardo era un pensatore: logico, ma anche intuitivo e di tipo visivo. Ed e’ essenzialmente questo che lo distingue. Ha lavorato molto sui fiumi come ingegnere, ma anche in pittura. Guarda, si puo’ dire che il Logos della Gioconda stia di fatto nel paesaggio fluviale, dell’Arno. Nella nota 1174 del Trattato, la nota che hai citata, l’acqua e’ usata come figura emblematica dei passaggi atemporali del destino umano. Leonardo era si’ logico-intuitivo, ma trattava di matematica e alchimia allo stesso tempo. Era piuttosto superstizioso. Quindi il senso di azzeramento temporale che da la figura dell’acqua che arriva ai fiumi e’ affine a all’idea di ripresa di continuo mutar delle cose che ben conosciamo anche in altre culture. Il discorso sarebbe piu’ lungo, dico, sui fiumi e Leonardo….ma sono sempre alla Apple e non mi danno abbastanza tempo. Di buono c’e’ che , comunque vadano le cose, il fiume scorre…

  3. Nick Lichter says:

    Hi Eve,

    How very good it is to check in and learn you’re back on the the water! Last evening overlooking the river it is cresting toward flood now. The current is very fast, its surface a concave swirling sheen seemingly at eye level and brutish in aspect. Very aggressive looking and a bit menacing, overfilled with the spring melt. So today I looked here for you again and found all these wonderful musings, careful, gentle counterpoints. Your musical beginning seems perfect as a rain, drops and more drops, patterning gradually, naturally, simply. Rain introducing river. We are very simple rain too aren’t we? Rain becoming river, simple persons becoming people. So good to be with you again, your writing and singing and playing again. I’ve missed you!

    Nick

  4. Liane says:

    OK, so I tripped across this Leonardo thing and it’s 1:30 in the am but of course I’m awake so I had to play around with the translation and came up with this abstract meandering….

    River Water
    touches you

    Lasting drops that float astray

    Swirling streams and ions brew
    Brooks and gushers make their way

    Past and future streams collide
    Blending in their crystal hue
    Sunlight fuses and divides

    And who’s to say what’s old and new?

    Yet in between – in mode sublime
    Rest flowing moments,
    Fixed in time.

    —–PS….Can’t wait to hear all the music that arose from your aqueous adventure!

  5. Eve says:

    Susan, Vittoria, Nick, Liane thank you all for your comments and feedback… Liane for yr excellent late-night musings, beloved Nick in the rain (I’m working on a song with rain in it just now for Mary, rain and trees…), and Vittoria, thanks for the Italian practice and Leonardo insights… wow!

  6. Lovely, Eve! I just added this to my own blog (properly credited, of course):

    http://ellen-kushner.livejournal.com/

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I’m posting a couple of versions of this first piece I’ve made since embarking on the River Trip. It’s called “I am really a very simple person.” I’m not entirely sure where it came from, but I’m really glad it showed up!

I made the keyboard version in early January. It goes like this:

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And now I’ve made a sort of shape-note choral version by overdubbing myself singing all the parts. It goes like this:

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While I like things about each version, I feel like perhaps the piece has something more to say that I’m not quite grasping with either of these recordings. So I am really open to finding out what you are hearing in the piece; perhaps your comments will help me clarify where it wants to go.

If you’re a musician and want to play with the piece yourself, you can download a draft score here.

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  1. Just coming from a real simple person, at least talking of music, I think I like it VERY MUCH the idea and MUCH MORE the second version with your bubb…whatever voice. It is YOUR thing, and, if I may say so, GO ON!!!
    Vittoria Chierici

  2. Corey Dargel says:

    It’s beautiful. In my opinion, the solfège is not quite right because it comes from a pedantic place, at least for some of us, too rooted in teaching and learning about music.

    Perhaps just a neutral, or unspecified, syllable in the rhythmic parts. It may not be the right text, but have you considered moving around the words of the title for the melodic lines? Leaving words out, shifting the order ever so slightly, or just adding and subtracting words while keeping the order. Something like:

    I am a very simple person
    I am
    I am really a person
    I am
    A simple person
    Very simple
    I am
    Really
    Simple
    A person

    etc. etc.

    There’s so much in just those words.
    I love the music.

  3. Eve says:

    thanks for your comments, vittoria and corey!

    corey, I agree that solfege is maybe not where I want to end up with this, and we’re gonna play with the piece in a workshop with high school students in the next couple of weeks, where we’ll try the idea you suggest, and also the david byrne method of singing nonsense until the right words come… another “simple” idea might be to sing the English letter names instead of solfege, do you like that any better?

    xoxox

  4. Corey Dargel says:

    I think you’ll get there eventually by experimenting with different ideas in the workshop. I’d say the letter names might be a little awkward since the vowel sounds involve some long EEEs and AAAs and there are sometimes consonants at the ends. But see what the singers think…

    xo

  5. it’s infectious – really lovely. i actually really like the piano version.

    the solfege doesn’t bother me, especially once we’re a minute or so into it. I just sort of imagine it as another language that I don’t understand.

    Corey – have you heard Florent Ghys’s Clignotants? Also uses solfege, and my reaction is similar. Slightly jarred at first, but once accustomed, it just becomes sound.

  6. everything in life especially art is personal, what I hear and feel is the exact experience of performing for commuters as they pass, continuous, growing, simple and moving.

  7. Jamie Crofts says:

    I love the Sol-Fa. It does have the resonance of Shape Note singing. Perhaps I like it being a non-religious Shape Note singing, or something like that.
    It’s just beautiful anyway, and could work as a multiple keyboard/percussion piece. I love it.

  8. Eve! Life got hold o me and I haven’t been by forever! So happy to get here and discover a new piece! Now to read some of your writing and get caught up!

  9. Wow! I really love the way this builds up, beautiful !

  10. Eve says:

    thank you all for your comments! I’ve performed the piece a few times now: at Stanford it was multichannel, which was particularly cool… I sing different elements live against the existing recording, starting with slightly tricky hockets and ending up simple (the descending scale)… and I’ve kept the solfege, the shape-note aspect that Jamie and Richard responded to seems to be the right thing…interested in trying an instrumental version of some kind one of these days soon…

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Internet access has been down here at Montalvo for more than a week, a kind of trippy thing to happen in the middle of the Silicon Valley, you gotta admit(!), so I’ve been remiss in telling you that my Stanford show has been moved to 12 March, and there will also be a show at Montalvo on 26 March. I’ll have more information about these shows as we get closer to the dates, and I’ll definitely keep you posted here.

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  1. Oviza says:

    Wish I could be there.

  2. Linda Norton says:

    Yes, how weird to lose connection there of all places. But maybe it was liberating?

    Now I MAY be able to come to one of your shows on the 12th!

    When is the Montalvo concert?

    Were you on Sarah’s show last night? I couldn’t listen to it but I was thinking of you.

    Great picture of you on the concert web site-so pretty.

  3. Eve says:

    Montalvo show is at 6 pm, I believe…

    I enjoyed doing the radio show with sarah the other night, and we played Landscaping and sang your praises as an Oakland poet, which makes me giggle, because for me you are definitely still an Easterner…

    the photo is by H. C. Porter, really glad you like it!

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